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Notes for 16-Sep-2026...


With AI so much in the news, I thought I'd say that I don't think all hope is lost, though it is a race. I put all my thoughts into my last novel, Termination of Species; which isn't what the title sounds like, but no spoilers. There's a path forward with AI, I believe, but not if we don't get going. Ebook is up for free on Amazon--

	https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CHFYBF41/?tag=reanimus-20
	The ultimate weapon isn't a bomb. It's a line of code.

Reviews greatly appreciated!

As Vernor Vinge said about it, "A very intriguing, multiway view on the future of AI. It's not just the humans who have something to worry about." (David Brin also liked it.)

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Proceeds benefit the Critters fund drive as ever from sales of...

	FIGHT THE IRISH NIGHT by Craig Kee Strete and Robert Wright Campbell - $5.99

		ReAnimus Press Store: www.ReAnimus.com/1765
		Amazon: www.amazon.com/dp/B0HHHQVKBZ/?tag=critters3a-20
		 (available in ebook + hardcover + paperback)

	
In the soot-mantled streets of Dublin, forty-three-year-old Padrick Parnell--once celebrated as "Fighting Parnell, the Five Leaf Shamrock, contender for the Empire Championship"--navigates a life defined by fading glory and deep personal grief. Haunted by the memory of his late wife, Katherine, Padrick spends his days visiting her grave, drinking stout at Conover's pub, and managing a handful of local fighters like young Terrence. But when a beaten, desperate young woman named Irene crosses his path in a dark alley, Padrick's protective instincts flare to life, pulling him into a web of local underground loyalties, dangerous secrets, and the turbulent undercurrents of Dublin life.
 
A richly atmospheric and poignant novel exploring aging, redemption, and the ghosts of the past.




[Disclaimer: Ye Olde Critter Captain also runs ReAnimus Press, sales from which help him keep Critters going as a free site.]


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Thanks for the donations, folks!  We are 35.9% of the way to the fund drive goal with contributions from 97 donors, leaving about $4500 to go.
Thanks especially to

	Larry Hodges
	Alistair Macdonald
	S Martin
	Rachel Messinger

for their recent donations to help keep Critters going. Much appreciated!

Stats by month...
Jan: $749.29 received toward $583 monthly fund drive goal, exceeded by $166.29 for the month
Feb: $181.72 received toward $583 monthly fund drive goal, short by $401.28 for the month
Mar: $191.13 received toward $583 monthly fund drive goal, short by $391.87 for the month
Apr: $307.38 received toward $583 monthly fund drive goal, short by $275.62 for the month
May: $354.94 received toward $583 monthly fund drive goal, short by $228.06 for the month
Jun: $248.79 received toward $583 monthly fund drive goal, short by $334.21 for the month
Jul: $252.10 received toward $583 monthly fund drive goal, short by $330.9 for the month
Aug: $133.96 received toward $583 monthly fund drive goal, short by $449.04 for the month
Sep: $139.42 received toward $583 monthly fund drive goal, short by $443.58 for the month

=> short by $2688.27 of annual fund drive goal to date (and $2300 shortfall from last year)


[See https://www.critters.org/donate.php for more information.]


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(No Woohoo!s this week, be sure to report your sales/publications/etc. via the www.critters.org/telldaworld.ht web page.)


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This week's Most Productive Critter award, for 3 critiques (at time of judging), averaging over 900 words each, goes to...

	Apoorva Vadi

To redeem an MPC, visit:  www.critters.org/usempc.ht

Congratulations!  To everyone else -- Crit early and often!

(For an explanation of the MPC award, see the www.critters.org/award.ht page.)

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Recommended Reading...
One of the best writing books - Secrets from the 6-time Best Editor
Hugo Award Master, Ben Bova: THE CRAFT OF WRITING SCIENCE FICTION THAT SELLS 
https://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1144
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Critters Workshop
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This week we have... [get from https://www.critters.org/private/mss.php ]...
                                                 
     Title                      	Author
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Week of 16-Sep-2026 (Crits due 23-Sep-2026):
 SF  The Seventh Sense of Home          Edward Moore -#32342
 F   Silver Fire and the Dead           Karen L. Kobylarz -#32343
 SF  Soldier Of Theseus                 Jon Rosenthal -#32344
 SF  Blood Planet                       Craig Borri -#32345
 F   Renfield                           Kris Baroudi -#32346
 H   Emergence                          Yri Hansen -#32347
 SF  Why we pay the Birds, chapter 1    James B Ross -#32348
 H   The Magpie                         Samuel Johnston -#32349

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Recommended books on writing:

THE CRAFT OF WRITING AND SELLING SCIENCE FICTION by Ben Bova
	ReAnimus Press Store: https://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1144
	Amazon: https://Amazon.com/dp/B006MAZPEI

HOW TO IMPROVE YOUR SPECULATIVE FICTION OPENINGS By (Critter member) Robert Qualkinbush
	https://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1184 | https://Amazon.com/dp/B007O272ZI

STAYIN' ALIVE - A WRITER'S GUIDE by three-time SFWA President Norman Spinrad
	How things really work in the art and commerce of publishing
	https://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1179 | https://Amazon.com/dp/B007SIC4I8

EXPERIMENT PERILOUS: THE 'BUG JACK BARRON' PAPERS by Norman Spinrad
	(A 99cent essay on SF and writing)
	https://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1180 | https://Amazon.com/dp/B007MF3MS8
 
Because you might enjoy it... JEWELS OF THE DRAGON by ALLEN L. WOLD
Rikard Braeth - think Indiana Jones in space
https://reanimus.com/store/?item=1388
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Pieces up for critique in other workshops...

In the lit workshop - https://critique.org/lit :
 L   The Sovereign Variable, Chapter 1  Eric Hughes -#32317

In the mystery workshop - https://critique.org/mystery :
 M   The Stop Sign                      Sarah Rowin -#32341

In the nonfiction workshop - https://critique.org/nonfiction :
 NH  The Men Who Stole the Dead: How Body Snatchers Helped Build Modern Medicine  Jamie Cares -#32307

In the script workshop - https://critique.org/script :
 SC  It Happened One Christmas          Robert W. Ross -#31694

In the kids workshop - https://critique.org/kids :
 YS  The Adventures of Jack, The Rabbit  Emmanuel Agyei-Boatey -#31578

In the western workshop - https://critique.org/western :
 W   Good Land for Dying                Kristen Vanderhoof -#32003

In the romance workshop - https://critique.org/romance :
 R   Reach for The Moon - Chapter 5     Kate Ferraro -#32291

In the photo workshop - https://critique.org/photo :
 PH  A Building By Kanda River          Nattamon Montriwat -#32096

In the apps workshop - https://critique.org/apps :
 GM  Uptown Valkyries                   Arthur Sankey -#31757

In the website workshop - https://critique.org/website :
 WW  Lawrence Vernon's Website          Lawrence Vernon -#32200

In the critters workshop - https://critique.org/critters :
 SF  The Seventh Sense of Home          Edward Moore -#32342
 F   Silver Fire and the Dead           Karen L. Kobylarz -#32343
 SF  Soldier Of Theseus                 Jon Rosenthal -#32344
 SF  Blood Planet                       Craig Borri -#32345
 F   Renfield                           Kris Baroudi -#32346
 H   Emergence                          Yri Hansen -#32347
 SF  Why we pay the Birds, chapter 1    James B Ross -#32348
 H   The Magpie                         Samuel Johnston -#32349
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You might also like... HOW TO IMPROVE YOUR SPECULATIVE FICTION OPENINGS by ROBERT QUALKINBUSH
The secret that separates the pros from the newbie
https://reanimus.com/store/?item=1184

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Because you might enjoy it... CHARLES FORT: PROPHET OF THE UNEXPLAINED by DAMON KNIGHT
The biography of the supernatural Charles Fort 
https://reanimus.com/store/?item=1695

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